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I just like to tell you about my essay in my writig class. This is my first in level 7, so I am a little bit nervous, for I need a good grade in writing.Let me show you my essay:
Effects of a new factory in my town
There are hundreds and hundreds of factories in all over the world. Most of the factories are located quiet close to some recidential areas and green areas such as rain forrests. People who live close to any factory are in a riscky situation. According El Clarin, which is an Argentine newspaper, there is a forty percent probability that a factory can negatively affect residents nearby. Nevertheless, thare are other negative effects on the environment and on people, including health problems, huge amount of garbage, and threats to the local wildlife.
A factory may increase the carbon footprint in the area. As Aaron Perkinson, who is an expert in environmental topics, penned in the Washington Post "Little children and elderly people have an eighty percent probability of suffering health problems as a result of breathing carbon dioxide or smog..............................
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ReplyDeleteHi, this is very interesting! yeah im agree with you, factories can be dangerous for people health, specially when u live near them. In the city i used to live , there is a factory in the middle of the city and when u drive through the smell is really annoying, stinks! Good essay!
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